peer review

 

This is my update from the Oct. 25^th peer and instructor Reviews. One of the main focuses was my “Logo.” The cake for the A was not seemly a good idea to the group, however an upside down slice of pie that form the shape of an “A” was strongly suggested by peers and instructor. It was also stated the upside down slice of pie gave an extra effect to the eye in the logo for the word see. It would present both with a cartoon effect.

Next, the white background I had for my pieces my peers and instructor did not like. My peers and instructor suggested color for the background. The next item was that the picture of myself in the multi page piece had a cut out choppy look and also the table look cut off at the edges.

These items have been corrected. The cake has been removed with the upside slice of pie for cartoon look. Second the white background was replaced with a lavender color background and baking tools with a fade look for the background as well. By changing the color for the background of the multi-page document to have a sequence and pattern I changed the color on the Poster and Website Design as well.

The choppy look of multi page document was corrected also with the use of the blur tool and the table as extended. Just thought I would share a copy of the original logo. You can catch the new by viewing my presentation. Talk to you later.